I like how it kinda has this mellow feel to it yet still gives a little bit of that chaotic feeling. However, I think the ending is a bit too abrupt. When it stopped, I actually thought my computer froze for a second. Maybe if you had it fade out rather than stop or try to find a way for it to loop, that might work better. But that's just me.
I don't have much to say except that the piano sounds a little sharp to me. I'm not sure if it's just me or what though... Other than that, I really like it.
But it doesn't sound as urgent as the original. Before the second instrument comes in, it sounds a little bland. If you added echoes and made the song a little faster in tempo, that would really help the song a lot. Also, the rain effect probably would be a nice touch to the song.
It's the echo...
The echo of the bells is causing the song to sound a little off-key. By itself merely to listen to, it's not all that great, but if used in a movie like a theme for psychotic person, it's great.
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